Standstill
Jun 25th, 2009 by gingatao
I almost came to a standstill, Ma’am. I tried to go so slowly. And use two distinct voices. Thankyou for listening. Here are the words.
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Category : Arts | Tags : poetry writing performance |
Jun 25th, 2009 by gingatao
I almost came to a standstill, Ma’am. I tried to go so slowly. And use two distinct voices. Thankyou for listening. Here are the words.
I can feel you tensing up already, sshhh, sparkling could sparkle a little longer to allow the mind to catch up the vision of salt fish before leading onto perfume. A hard ‘k’ with the ‘ling’ trickling after would allow the extra moment in that word. Then just half a finger click before the second ‘and’. No, no, it wouldn’t break the rhythm but I can see that would be the worry. Love the mellowness of the voice - fabulous Squires. I closed my eyes and read the words after… then closed my eyes again.