Now that tempo is perfect… absolutely. Less emphasis on the rhyme and alliteration to make it flicker almost unintentionally can be next, haha, but knowing you this was a one hit and done… but I am SO impressed with the soft slow rhythm you maintain. YAY!
I like this, warts ‘n’ all, how you stutter over ‘when the meditation fails’ - how apt!
I think more poets should do ‘micro-podcasting’ (if I can call it that) like this, a poem at a time. I’ve thought about doing it myself, and have made a few recordings, some of which ended up on Wordsalad.
I’m sure more and more poets on the web will take up the idea. Being able to hear the poet is so important. I hope you keep it up.
Now that tempo is perfect… absolutely. Less emphasis on the rhyme and alliteration to make it flicker almost unintentionally can be next, haha, but knowing you this was a one hit and done… but I am SO impressed with the soft slow rhythm you maintain. YAY!
They just embarrass me, Narnie and I don’t want to do it anymore. I want to be JD Salinger.
I like this, warts ‘n’ all, how you stutter over ‘when the meditation fails’ - how apt!
I think more poets should do ‘micro-podcasting’ (if I can call it that) like this, a poem at a time. I’ve thought about doing it myself, and have made a few recordings, some of which ended up on Wordsalad.
I’m sure more and more poets on the web will take up the idea. Being able to hear the poet is so important. I hope you keep it up.